Sunday, March 8, 2009
to be loved.....
Internet tries to tell me all about Love
Yet I am mystified…
Night after night
Too much candy, I perceive
Too many fools, I believe
Love me
When the grass says I am yellow
Love me
When all the words fade
Love me
When the illness takes over
Love me
Whenever you find time to Love me….
Of that SMS musingly typed
One sluggish night,
Saved in Drafts, yet never sent
Love me
Like the spring in winters
Love me
The way you eat a chocolate cake
Love me
At every station
Love me
The way you want to love me
Of those calls expected after a stupid fight
Never answered;
Yet enough to light up her face
Love me
Under the vast blue sky
Love me
Under shadow of those heavy clouds
Love me
Under those satin sheets
Love me
Anywhere you want to love me
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19 comments:
The way you eat a chocolate cake!!...yummy!!..:P
aah... in short, "love me.. unconditionally.."
:) nice
Akshay.. get rid of the word verification na.. please..
brocasarea: i need a cake now....
Shruti: ur wish is my command.... word verification is gone...
go to a nearby bakery:D
love me when the grass says i am yellow? - dry love?
under the satin sheets- it is kinky indeed..
picturising the poem.. its is good
love me the way u eat a chocolate cake.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
yummmmmmmy
love me the way u eat a chocolate cake.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
yummmmmmmy
Hey Chriz... thanks
Emaan.... my lucky day....two comments from u...
woW! Wonderful :)
woderfully scripted.. i am late and i want a chocolate cake now
Wow terrific!!
Reminded me of that song.."lovefool" in "Romeo and Juliet"..except your poem was nicer than the lyrics of the song!!
Hey Alok.... thanks
Chriz..... sure be my guest .... i am baking one now...
crasiezt: wow.... really...I am elated.... u've made my day....
Hope all is well with ya Akshay. ur MIA!
Keshi.
i LOVE this poem!!!
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