Sunday, March 8, 2009

to be loved.....


Internet tries to tell me all about Love
Yet I am mystified…
Night after night
Too much candy, I perceive
Too many fools, I believe

Love me
When the grass says I am yellow
Love me
When all the words fade
Love me
When the illness takes over
Love me
Whenever you find time to Love me….

Of that SMS musingly typed
One sluggish night,
Saved in Drafts, yet never sent

Love me
Like the spring in winters
Love me
The way you eat a chocolate cake
Love me
At every station
Love me
The way you want to love me

Of those calls expected after a stupid fight
Never answered;
Yet enough to light up her face

Love me
Under the vast blue sky
Love me
Under shadow of those heavy clouds
Love me
Under those satin sheets
Love me
Anywhere you want to love me

19 comments:

brocasarea said...

The way you eat a chocolate cake!!...yummy!!..:P

Shruti said...

aah... in short, "love me.. unconditionally.."
:) nice

Akshay.. get rid of the word verification na.. please..

Akshay said...

brocasarea: i need a cake now....

Akshay said...

Shruti: ur wish is my command.... word verification is gone...

brocasarea said...

go to a nearby bakery:D

Chriz said...

love me when the grass says i am yellow? - dry love?

under the satin sheets- it is kinky indeed..

picturising the poem.. its is good

Emaan said...

love me the way u eat a chocolate cake.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
yummmmmmmy

Emaan said...

love me the way u eat a chocolate cake.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
yummmmmmmy

Akshay said...

Hey Chriz... thanks

Akshay said...

Emaan.... my lucky day....two comments from u...

alok said...

woW! Wonderful :)

Chriz said...

woderfully scripted.. i am late and i want a chocolate cake now

Emaan said...
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crasiezt said...

Wow terrific!!
Reminded me of that song.."lovefool" in "Romeo and Juliet"..except your poem was nicer than the lyrics of the song!!

Akshay said...

Hey Alok.... thanks

Akshay said...

Chriz..... sure be my guest .... i am baking one now...

Akshay said...

crasiezt: wow.... really...I am elated.... u've made my day....

Keshi said...

Hope all is well with ya Akshay. ur MIA!

Keshi.

farustar said...

i LOVE this poem!!!